Anger smoked

A simple Haiku

Pacified anger still exist, partially vaporized
Blurry vision entangled fear
Thwarting immense passion to limit

By Navaparna Gautam

A beginner stepping into a new platform, thrilled with excitement! Hope this community welcomes this curious newbie!! Starting my journey, undertaking every challenge and a firm desire to complete all what I wish to accomplish, decision already taken, only need to begin and here I am, with dreams and hopes...

13 replies on “Anger smoked”

Oooooooooo. Navaparna, I’m here πŸ™‚ Would you be willing to tell me about the structure you are using for this Haiku? You may have noticed that I follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure, I’m keen to hear about yours πŸ™‚

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Yea, I have noticed your pattern. Actually, I didn’t follow any such rule or pattern to write a Haiku, which I think I must have done so…. It is somewhat like 6-4-5, lol! I m new to this concept, tho I have completed 3-4 and all of them has different patterns, some followed the modern haiku pattern, 5 – 7- 5 syllables…. I haven’t posted here… But, they are coming soon!✨


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